His heart popped

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Pxl on Just when things were looking better…April 2, 2010
Ironically, he didn't see it coming.
Pxl on An Alliterative attemptDecember 13, 2009
Awesome attempt, Alpha! Awe-inspiring approach. Ahhh.
Pxl on I only have faith in skepticism.November 24, 2009
This might be my favorite yet.
AlphaSteve on Some more possible constrained writing gamesNovember 17, 2009
One day I intend to gather a collection of short story authors, and together we will write a series of…
Pixel on #20:December 11, 2008
I'll probably take down either the story or the video at some point. It seems like overkill.

Pixelation15 years ago2 years ago01 mins

She was drinking an orange soda, the woman of Eli’s dreams. It was the kind of Crush that hurt. Eli tried to stop her, but woke up instead.

Pixelation15 years ago2 years ago01 mins

She whispered across the glass, “I love you.” He looked out at her and said, “I know. I’ve always known.” This was her favorite movie.

Ironically, he didn't see it coming.

Awesome attempt, Alpha! Awe-inspiring approach. Ahhh.

This might be my favorite yet.

One day I intend to gather a collection of short story authors, and together we will write a series of…

I'll probably take down either the story or the video at some point. It seems like overkill.